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Jeff x Jane Failed Dinner Party chapter 6

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Hey guys sorry that it took so long I was just busy with life...But I never forget my fans! XD



Halfway down the hallway Jeff cautiously placed Jane on her feet.

"Come on," he urged, guiding her to his room.

Jane hadn't noticed before but he actually had quite a few rooms in his house. She wondered what each door hid behind it.

When Jeff had finally gave Jane the last push into his room, he jumped out, shut the door, locking it. She heard him mumble through the door. "The food I made before is cold…I'll go make you some more. Behave, please!"

"No keys this time around. No way out." She thought in despair.

She stumbled over to a mirror, gazing at her reflection, studying herself.

Her neck. It was raw, cherry-colored, drawing attention. Her left cheek had a scar from where Jeff dragged his knife at, bleeding a tiny bit. She lifted her gown to reveal a bright pink side. She leaned in a little to get a good look at her nose. It was swollen, puffy, red, but no longer bleeding. At least he hadn't broken it.

She tenderly poked it when she burst out crying.

"Oh, G-God," she whimpered. "He's going to k-kill me…I'm not going to get away."

She clumsily walked to his bed, collapsing right before she reached it. She dragged herself up against the soft, cushy side of it, taking a moment before pulling herself up.

She noticed the blood immediately. He was dead on; he had gotten blood on it.

Jane surveyed the room for the pen, finding it next to a wall, where he had probably thrown it. It wasn't that far away from where the shattered phone was. He was also correct about the fact that she hadn't punctured him deep enough to really injure him. It was obvious because the dried blood only covered a small section of the pen.

She was a complete failure; she couldn't even protect herself. She couldn't make smart decisions. Worst of all…she couldn't ask for help.

If she had just ask her neighbors for help and stay out of Jeff's house when her gut and judgment had so frantically advised, she wouldn't even be in such a stupid, dangerous, dependant situation.

What would she had told her neighbors if she asked for their help?

"I'm so s-sorry…I needed your assistance."

"My friends and family are being held hostage by a madman."

"Jeff scares the shit out of me."

And she knew that would have been the end of it.

Jeff couldn't let her go now.

She had to be a good girl, behave, raise no suspicion until she could find a fool-proof plan to get safely away.

Jane knew why Jeff had done this. Whether it was the adorable, shy, and quiet Jeff she so faintly knew or not.

He was sick. Disturbed, mentally ill. And she was originally kidnapped so he could rape her, have his fun.

If he didn't get the 'feeling'…she didn't know what he would do to her.

If she was a good girl…she was safe.

"But what made him get the 'feeling' the first time, when he decided to kidnap me and kill my parents and his family?"

"What is wrong with him? Why is he this way?"

When Jane watched Randy and his gang of thugs bully Liu and Jeff, Jeff lunged at Randy and started beating him with Randy's lackeys trying to pull him off, beat him up, and try to stab him while she just watched too afraid to interfere. She could see Jeff smiling with glee as he beated and stabbed the three bullies as if he killed a person before Randy was his victim.

Maybe something could possibly made him get the 'feeling', other than Randy.

Because she hadn't even been around when he got the 'feeling', when he decided to kill his family, her parents, her friends, kidnap her, that he was going to have her, whether she liked it or not.

Maybe the 'feeling' was random.

"No."

It couldn't possibly be random. Something had to cause it.

He seemed to get the 'feeling' when he was angry, annoyed.

Or when she attacked him.

Violence.

That was it. When she got violent with him! Aggression was what made him get the 'feeling'!

Jane felt confused.

"So what made him originally get the 'feeling'?" She asked herself.

"Why is he this way? What turned him into such a traumatized, unstable monster?"



I know it's a short chapter but I really needed to gather my thoughts for future chapters.

And I want you all to give me an idea who Jeff's FIRST victim was that made him get the 'feeling'...And it CAN'T be Randy because Jeff already had the 'feeling'.
Sorry that it's short! DX
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I can't stop reading XDDD